Seriously?
Here is the first linkof the search: http://www.lbl.gov/Education/ELSI/research-main.html
It took me one second to click. A lot less that it took you to write about your 2 degrees and how you never heard the word and how I discovered a new term to skew my article. Some strong hate bro
You must be joking.You want me analyze the famous study to show what? That smoking increased lungcancer? Or HRT increases breast cancer? Or you think you have arguments against these results.
And for God's sake,this is a internet blog post that I post weekly. Will I write this way if I am writing for a peer-reviewed journal. No.
And you have serious issue for me not giving evidence for the word" It is clearly one of the most misunderstood concepts".??
And just a suggestion If you want someone to change, you don’t write like the way you did. You post comes across as rude and personal, eventhough I love how you try to sneak in your "no offense intended" every now and then. This is common sense and nothing to do with persuasive writing, which is your career.Good luck.
Of course I can put two words together, 'basic science' is not a term that makes no sense. That isn't at all what I said. I feel that you are using the term as though it means something specific to the reader when it doesn't. If someone who was once a scientist comes across those words used as a term and doesn't know what you're talking about, how is random-reader-guy meant to? I'm not challenging that the term exists, I'm challenging your use of it and whether it's the ideal way to write.
And of course (again) what I'm saying isn't personal. I have nothing against you as a person, I don't bear you any ill will or have the slightest inclination to do so. Critiques by nature are critical and frankly, it
is frustrating the way you present yourself as an authority. I'm sorry that you are not able to separate my strong criticism from the what you perceive to be the motivation for that criticism. I'm not 'sneaking' in a comment about no offense intended, I'm blatantly stating that no offense is directed to you based on who you are. I obviously have an issue with your article and to a degree, the self-promotion because what you're promoting isn't a great product yet. I have zero issue with you as a person, and that's what I'm telling you when I say 'no personal offense is intended'.
Put aside my criticism of your terminology for a moment. Can you at least see why you should improve the structure of some of your writing?
This article of yours, which I read some time ago, is actually a fantastic piece:
http://workout911.com/?p=3709
It's written concisely, I understand where the author is taking me and the progression makes sense. You have an introduction, obvious tie-ins to the reader and the topic itself is actually an interesting one.
The article you've just posted doesn't read well. It makes giant leaps regarding it's content. If you want it stated simply, it doesn't stick on topic. It's all over the place (the structural problem) ... and the biggest problem is that as a reader, I have no idea if you're supporting 'basic science' based strategies, 'applied research' based strategies or if you're just telling me to be wary of what a personal trainer is trying to sell me on ... ? I feel like there was possibly two articles worth of subject here, maybe a series of three even but it's been condensed and chopped into something that's extremely difficult to read.
You can attack my reference to my own experience, it doesn't matter to me, and it doesn't matter to my critique. If you have no interest in improving your articles that's your choice, of course.